I know. I'll do better next time. Sorry for being too frank. I had to deal with such "poetry" all the time in high-school. I used to write the same sort of poetry though. (In the sense of stereotyped teen angst and depression) I'm certainly no better at poetry, and I'd call my poetry in retrospect contrived as well. I suppose a good start for anyone would be to read Sylvia Plath. I promise not to be a jerk next time. Again, I really apologize. Don't get discouraged like I did, MallyMal.